Ask OASISSample Paper Reviews: Overview
Wondering what to expect from your paper review appointment? Below are the types of assignments we review, along with sample feedback. Feedback will vary among writing instructional specialists but will consist of some of these:
- Explanations of errors
- Links to resources
- Questions or reactions from a reader’s perspective
- Recommended next steps
- Revision strategies
- Highlighted patterns
- Models of effective writing
- Video clips to watch
The appointment form in myPASS is the best place to tell us your goals and about areas you are struggling with in your writing. Be as specific as possible to get targeted help within the 30-minute timeframe.
Discussion Posts
- Sample Review of a Discussion Post (PDF)This document contains an excerpt of a discussion post with sample feedback. Please click on the file to view.
Undergraduate Papers
- Sample Review of an Undergraduate Paper--1000 Level (PDF)This document contains excerpts of a 1000 level undergraduate paper with sample feedback. Please click on the file to view.
- Sample Review of an Undergraduate Paper--3000 Level (PDF)This document contains excerpts of a 3000 level undergraduate paper with sample feedback. Please click on the file to view.
Graduate Papers
- Sample Review of a Graduate Paper (PDF)This document contains excerpt of a graduate-student paper with sample feedback. Please click on the file to view.
Major Assessments
- Sample Review of a Major Assessment (PDF)This document contains an excerpt of a student's major assessment with sample feedback. Please click on the file to view.
Revisions of Previously Submitted Material
- Sample Review of a Revision (PDF)This document contains an excerpt of a student's revised draft with sample feedback. Please click on the file to view.
Graded Papers
- Sample Review of a Graded Paper (PDF)This document contains an excerpt of a student's graded paper with sample feedback. Please click on the file to view.
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Walden University Writing Center. (n.d.) Paper reviews: Sample paper reviews. https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/academic-skills/paper-reviews/sample-paper-reviews