Here are some revision strategies to keep in mind:
Adjust your expectations.
Plan for revision time.
Think big picture.
Think critically about your revisions.
Become a peer reviewer.
Read your writing out loud.
Save each draft as its own separate document.
Using a revision checklist may be helpful to think about the piece of writing as a whole. Use this model or create a checklist of your own.
The introduction gives adequate and appropriate background information. It is organized from more general to more specific.